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  (Adam's POV)

     I was beginning to awake from a well needed rest with the sound of a glass shattering.  I got up and immediately went to the source of the sound.  I saw Tommy in my kitchen starting to clean up a broken mug and spilled coffee.  He looked up at me and smiled innocently. "Umm.. Hi Adam!" He said sweetly, when i noticed two fuzzy black cat ears poking between his hair and a long black tail coming from his back side.  "Tommy, what the hell do you have on your head?" I asked, still tired and not in the mood to deal with this ongoing trainwreck yet. "I'm a kitty cat! See!?", he said pointing to his cat ears.  I sighed.  "Tommy, I'm going to take a shower. Ok?  I'll be back." I said hoping to become fully awakened by a shower.  He just nodded, smiling.

     When I got out of the shower and got ready, I re-entered the kitchen hoping to see Tommy without cat ears and a tail.  However, I was disapointed by the sight of Tommy's fluffy black tail and cat ears.  "Ok, Tommy why are you wearing those ears and that tail?  And why are you in my house? How did you even get into my house?!" I asked.  He looked at me and replied "Well, One: I'm a kitty - cat! Two: I got bored at my house so I came here! Three: Cam told me where you keep the spare key!" I sighed. 'Why is Tommy so hyper?' I thought. "I didn't think you would be mad..." He added in a sugary voice.  "It's okay.." I said. "But what do you mean about being a cat?" I asked, confused and starting to get a headache.
the start to my very first fanfiction! Adommy! for all those people that knew Tommy was part kitty!

I'm very embarassed to upload this.. It's kind of an impulse..

i need constructive criticism, please! :D

ok so this is chapter 1.. i probably wont continue to the real story unless anyone actually likes this! So please comment and tell me how you feel about it!
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GlitterGlambert98 Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2011
Woah!!! This is awesome!!!
Tommy's a kitty cat...I can soooo imagine this is mah head xD
Nice!!
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sasunaru-yaoi-freaxx Featured By Owner May 1, 2011
Hah, thanks so much :D
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GlitterGlambert98 Featured By Owner May 2, 2011
Yurp(:
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shirosaki-sama Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2011
pleeeaaaase conitnuuueee?!
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:iconsasunaru-yaoi-freaxx:
haha i would love to XD but im really lazy and i think i might give up! i dun think this story is going anywhere~ & im surprised i could keep focused enough :D
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shirosaki-sama Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2011
pweeeaaazzzeeeee! :iconpoutplz:
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sasunaru-yaoi-freaxx Featured By Owner May 1, 2011
Ahwz, well maaybe but ehhh. Haha
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shirosaki-sama Featured By Owner May 3, 2011
:iconpoutplz:
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:iconsasunaru-yaoi-freaxx:
uh, sorry ??
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xXEmo-Teddy-BearXx Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2011
He ish not a cat anymorezzz! He's a shark! XD
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