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  (Adam's POV)

     I was beginning to awake from a well needed rest with the sound of a glass shattering.  I got up and immediately went to the source of the sound.  I saw Tommy in my kitchen starting to clean up a broken mug and spilled coffee.  He looked up at me and smiled innocently. "Umm.. Hi Adam!" He said sweetly, when i noticed two fuzzy black cat ears poking between his hair and a long black tail coming from his back side.  "Tommy, what the hell do you have on your head?" I asked, still tired and not in the mood to deal with this ongoing trainwreck yet. "I'm a kitty cat! See!?", he said pointing to his cat ears.  I sighed.  "Tommy, I'm going to take a shower. Ok?  I'll be back." I said hoping to become fully awakened by a shower.  He just nodded, smiling.

     When I got out of the shower and got ready, I re-entered the kitchen hoping to see Tommy without cat ears and a tail.  However, I was disapointed by the sight of Tommy's fluffy black tail and cat ears.  "Ok, Tommy why are you wearing those ears and that tail?  And why are you in my house? How did you even get into my house?!" I asked.  He looked at me and replied "Well, One: I'm a kitty - cat! Two: I got bored at my house so I came here! Three: Cam told me where you keep the spare key!" I sighed. 'Why is Tommy so hyper?' I thought. "I didn't think you would be mad..." He added in a sugary voice.  "It's okay.." I said. "But what do you mean about being a cat?" I asked, confused and starting to get a headache.
the start to my very first fanfiction! Adommy! for all those people that knew Tommy was part kitty!

I'm very embarassed to upload this.. It's kind of an impulse..

i need constructive criticism, please! :D

ok so this is chapter 1.. i probably wont continue to the real story unless anyone actually likes this! So please comment and tell me how you feel about it!
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:iconglitterglambert98:
GlitterGlambert98 Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2011
Woah!!! This is awesome!!!
Tommy's a kitty cat...I can soooo imagine this is mah head xD
Nice!!
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sasunaru-yaoi-freaxx Featured By Owner May 1, 2011
Hah, thanks so much :D
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GlitterGlambert98 Featured By Owner May 2, 2011
Yurp(:
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shirosaki-sama Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2011
pleeeaaaase conitnuuueee?!
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:iconsasunaru-yaoi-freaxx:
haha i would love to XD but im really lazy and i think i might give up! i dun think this story is going anywhere~ & im surprised i could keep focused enough :D
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shirosaki-sama Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2011
pweeeaaazzzeeeee! :iconpoutplz:
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:iconsasunaru-yaoi-freaxx:
sasunaru-yaoi-freaxx Featured By Owner May 1, 2011
Ahwz, well maaybe but ehhh. Haha
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shirosaki-sama Featured By Owner May 3, 2011
:iconpoutplz:
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:iconsasunaru-yaoi-freaxx:
uh, sorry ??
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xXEmo-Teddy-BearXx Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2011
He ish not a cat anymorezzz! He's a shark! XD
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:iconsasunaru-yaoi-freaxx:
Haha he's a shark-cat gay monster!
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xXEmo-Teddy-BearXx Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2011
ha Ha YUSH!!!! <3
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:iconsasunaru-yaoi-freaxx:
tommah!
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:iconxxemo-teddy-bearxx:
xXEmo-Teddy-BearXx Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2011
shark!
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sasunaru-yaoi-freaxx Featured By Owner May 1, 2011
Mexican terrorist French shark!
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astig0802 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2010
Please write another chapter, I want to see how this develops. :)
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:iconsasunaru-yaoi-freaxx:
I think I'm going to! And Thanks for commenting!!!
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:iconalexanderxchan:
AlExAnDeRxChAn Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is interesting,even though i hate this pairing. Anyways. Is Tommy like someone from Loveless? He's still a virgin isn't he....*slants eyes*
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:iconsasunaru-yaoi-freaxx:
well, no.. lolz you know how im crazy.. so Adam told Tommy to go back to his "kitty pen" and i kno Tommy's half cat! so its gonna be that Tommy turns half cat and acts like a kid or flamboyantly gay from friday nights to sunday nights! lolz why does you hate Adommy!?
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:iconalexanderxchan:
AlExAnDeRxChAn Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Because Tommy's straight and Adam looks better with Kris Allen damnit!
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randomWaffle123 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2010  Student General Artist
Well, technically Kris Allen is straight and he also has a wife. /:
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shirosaki-sama Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2011
*randomly comments* i luve yer icon *eyebrow wiggle*
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randomWaffle123 Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2011  Student General Artist
Haha, thanks!! xD
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shirosaki-sama Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2011
where can i find more stuff like your icon? :iconpussinbootsplz:
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:iconrandomwaffle123:
randomWaffle123 Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2011  Student General Artist
... my gallery >.> Well, not really. But most of it is Adam-related (; Feel free to check it out <3
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:iconalexanderxchan:
AlExAnDeRxChAn Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I know that. I just like the messed up little world in my head :meow:
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:iconrandomwaffle123:
randomWaffle123 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2010  Student General Artist
Lol so do I <3
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:iconalexanderxchan:
AlExAnDeRxChAn Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
It's fun in there. o.O
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kikiari Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2010
This is really nice, although short. Really all it needs is a polish and more story line. I'll read this if you make more, and if you ever need an editor contact me. Have more work than this [its easier to be consistant when there is more work to be consistant about] This has the makings of an interesting story. It has a childlike innocence, but the story isnt written childishly. I hope you write more^^
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:iconsasunaru-yaoi-freaxx:
Thank you so much!!!! I'm most likely going to right more ank I guess this was kind of like a beginning thing! I'm so happy you liked it because this is my first fanfiction thing!
:love:
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kikiari Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2010
^^ I'm glad I was browsing through the prose section is all. Keep up the good work. Cheers^^
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:iconsasunaru-yaoi-freaxx:
Ahw I'm so glad you liked it! Thanks!!! :]
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kikiari Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2010
^^
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